On your face the sun rise
Like vale-lands hidden by the high hills
The dark is pushed away when you wake
Love Challenge 5
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On your face the sun rise
Like vale-lands hidden by the high hills
The dark is pushed away when you wake
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8 responses to “Love Challenge 5”
Okay I will do that. Thank you
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These are so beautiful. When you have finished this series, you will be able to string them together into a modern Song of Solomon!
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That’s a great idea! ❤😀
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It will be a truly great poem!
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Let’s see how it goes. I still have about 5 more verses.
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If the spirit moves you, don’t stop there!
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It’s a perfect idea. How do I tag people to blogposts so they can see it?
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Myself, I’d wait till the whole thing wound down, put it together with the title which will come to you, and then republish the whole thing together, with a short explanation about it at the top.
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