Rising Sun

1

I peered through my window pane
The morning sun rose radiantly
And from a distant plane
A smile appeared so glowingly

2

Alas the golden sun arrives trifle shy
With the clouds she sailed
Growing above the valleys and heights
And upon all who on Earth dwelled

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Commentary:

This piece is a collaboration between I and Fonuoha my friend from Nigeria. He is a prolific writer of plays and short stories. A better man I will say! He wrote the first stanza.


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